Writer's Corner - #1
What follows is a bit of fiction, written simply for the sake of writing it.
On my way home from work today, I witnessed a grown man - at least thirty years old - picking his nose and eating it. He was cruising along in the middle lane, with his right hand at the twelve o'clock position and his left hand moving mechanically between his nose and his lips. Stab, stab, piiick; pop it in. Repeat.I don't think he even realized what he was doing.
As I passed him, he made eye contact with me, and I was too disgusted to try hiding my look of horror. I expected to see embarrassment in his features, but I saw only confusion. His finger never stopped working, even after I passed out of view.
Update: I decided to take out the writing that seemed forced and childish.
1 Comments:
I think that you should keep the last line. I liked it.
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